Thursday, 11 September 2014

Goldilocks and the there bears

I have been learning to write complete sentences, add details, and change the beginnings of my sentences. This is a story about Goldilocks. I have not finished it yet but this is what I have done so

One sunny sunny day a boy named taraia. he was on his swing at the backyard then I saw a bunny and it ran into the forest.after that i saw a   tiny house then  i knocked on the door.but  no one was there saw i open the door carefully . after i was so hungry the table was full of porridge. the first bowl of porridge was to hot the second bowl was to glue then the lasde bowl was gassed riet so he gabolde it up. then he went into the laoge the father chair was too big the mather chair was to bounce. the baby char was gassed riet. then he went up stairs the father bed was too big the mather bed was to bounce the 
The Three Bears - Project